CHRISMED Journal of Health and Research

LETTER TO EDITOR
Year
: 2018  |  Volume : 5  |  Issue : 4  |  Page : 305--306

Syllabic medicine (Cinquain)


Upreet Dhaliwal 
 Former Director-Professor of Ophthalmology, University College of Medical Sciences, University of Delhi, New Delhi, India

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Patient

Sickly, Dying, Hurting

Helplessly Accepting

Ignorant, Entitled, Hopeful

Wretched…

Tablet

Good/Bad, Bitter/Sweet

Curing, Fixing, Breaking

Small pill with big promises

Pricey…

Scalpel

Sharp, Brisk, Deadly

Uprooting, Effacing

Only as good as the Surgeon

Aloof…

Quack

Untrained Cheater

Shamming – Fooling the sick

Immune, Blatant, Harmful, Godman

Phony…

Systems

Selfish, Greedy

Preserving Status Quo

Healthcare is last priority

Sickening…

Learner

Optimistic

Slogging, Sacrificing

Altruistic, ignores selfcare

Burned out…

Healer

Able, Human

Preventing, Curing, Caring

Tireless against systemic odds

Unsung…

Poetry is a form of literature where feelings and emotions are given primacy – the reader is transported, through the inventive use of style and rhythm, into another world. Medical students are reported to gain important perspectives when exposed to such an expressive way of communication- “When my emotions get engaged, I feel connected”; “It is a different way of looking at things; a different perspective”; “Poetry takes me to places I never knew existed”; “It compels me to examine my feelings”.[1]

Although many variants are described, the typical Cinquain (cinq [French] = five) is a five-line stanza that does not have to rhyme and relies on syllables in a specific order: two, four, six, eight and two.[2] A subject is introduced in the first line; the subsequent lines describe the subject using adjectives, action words, and the feelings that the subject evokes. The stanza ends with a reference to the subject again, perhaps with a telling synonym/description as in the case of this poem (Patient… Wretched; Tablet… Pricey; Scalpel… Aloof; Quack… Phony; Systems… Sickening; Learner… Burned out; Healer… Unsung).

These basic rules make it possible for poets to use only a few simple words to express feelings and emotions, and they are the very reason I chose the Cinquain as a poetic way to direct attention toward the issues that plague healthcare in our country today.

There is increasing evidence from around us that the healthcare system is being stretched beyond its capacity and that it is collapsing even as we watch.[3] Patient expectations are changing faster than the system can expand to meet demand and provide satisfaction. In the face of continuing illiteracy and superstition, quacks find ample opportunity to exploit and misguide.[4]

Each stanza (and, thus, each Cinquain) refers to an important stakeholder in the health-care scenario – the patient, pharmaceuticals, physicians and surgeons, health professions' learners, administrators, regulators and governments, and (unfortunately) also quacks. All of us have a vested interest in health care, and only when we work for the same ultimate outcome - health for all - in a selfless and concerted manner, incorruptibly, will we notice change.[5]

References

1Supraja C. Seeking solace in poetry. RHiME 2017;4:62-3. Available from: https://www.rhime.in/ojs/index.php/rhime/article/view/139. [Last accessed on 2018 Jul 12].
2Cinquain; 07 July, 2018. Available from: https://www.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinquain. [Last accessed on 2018 Jul 12].
3Nagpal N. Incidents of violence against doctors in India: Can these be prevented? Natl Med J India 2017;30:97-100.
4Arora N, Juneja R, Meher R. Complication of an odontogenic infection to an orbital abscess: The role of a medical fraudster (“Quack”). Iran J Otorhinolaryngol 2018;30:181-4.
5Patel V, Parikh R, Nandraj S, Balasubramaniam P, Narayan K, Paul VK, et al. Assuring health coverage for all in India. Lancet 2015;386:2422-35.